Okay, well I took Free Spirits to SAC's Date with a Demo tonight.
I got some positive feedback from the panel members, John Acosta and Ron Lopata, both local songwriters/producers. John was kind enough to see a Gordon Lightfoot feel to my song/voice, and Ron said it evoked a Van Morrison vibe for him... so, so far, so good...
BUT, they both felt the song's chorus was a pre-chorus and not an actual chorus... so more work needs to be done although the last line of my chorus - The only true free spirit here is me - did withstand their scrutiny, they just wished there was a bigger payoff in the chorus. All in all though, very encouraging...
I will return...
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