Wednesday, November 21, 2007

A Beat Away From A Critique

Well, I received my best critique yet for one of these song contests (Song of the Year). You can hear the song in my ReverbNation player in the top section of this blog. Anyone want to market this for me?

The following information is a critique of a single piece of material you have submitted to Song of the Year for review. The opinions stated are from an experienced professional in the music, entertainment, or media industries. Your views may differ greatly from their views of the material since music and lyrics are a subjective art form. Please be mindful that the comments made about your material will be critical only to encourage your songwriting ability and help develop your skill.

Song Writer Title
Lorenzo Policelli A Beat Away From My Heart
Reviewer ID Reviewer Specialty
#RB93272 Radio Media Supervisor

Section 1

EMOTIONAL IMPACT

(Scores below)

LYRICS: Impact of words and phrasing; clarity of content; structural and grammatical.
Weak Average Strong
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10


TITLE: Ability to attract listener attention; pertinence to the song.
Weak Average Strong
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10


OVERALL EMOTIONAL IMPACT
Weak Average Strong
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Emotional Commentary: The lyrics to the material are tender and engaging, the illustrative words create such a vivid picture. Therefore making the passion in the mood come to life. "A Beat Away From My Heart" is a great title for this song, its relative and original. This song is easy to relate to which makes it more personal and overall emotional.

Section 2

TECHNICAL EVALUATION

(Scores below)

Writing Mechanics: Rhyme structure, grammatical quality (slang & dialect none withstanding)
Weak Average Strong
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10


STRUCTURE: Composition elements and arrangement.
Weak Average Strong
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10


Technical Commentary: Wonderful rhythm and rhyme structure, great sense of emotional direction with the choice of words used throughout the material. The overall structure was flawless in the construction, arrangement, and delivery.

Section 3

MARKETABILITY

(Score below)

MARKETABILITY: Sound quality, mix, dynamics, and finishing.
Weak Average Strong
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

1 comment:

pinball king said...

Kudos! Wish I could hear it, my speakers are broken.

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