Friday, July 06, 2007

Pause and Wonder #2



Well, I've learned how to embed an MP3 player directly into my blog, so now I can post my creations right within the post... so that's cool. Please listen to the song and make any comments you'd like to (I can always delete them if they aren't kind :)

I received some nice feedback on the song after I posted it on Muses' Muse... Here are some of the comments:
  • I think this is a good song that you should pursue from the arrangement standpoint, so that it works better for the casual "I'm only going to listen to this once" type audience
  • I think you should just add the full drums at some point in this... I think it needs a little more work on the vocal (intonation). Enjoyed the listen!
  • I like it as a song, and I would love to hear it with some of the "clutter" removed. Right now, it is as though I am having to listen through other stuff to get to its centre.
  • Lyrically, this is a really good.
Always nice to get some feedback and helpful criticism. I need to make more use of this fantastic resource.

Ci vedimes...

2 comments:

Pinball King said...

I am sorry to hear of your father.

Renz said...

Thanks man...

He's working on getting better...

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